Description
Timothy
By
Rico
Kind
Timothy . He is as strong as Rico.
He
is muscly. He is as fast as a red Ferrari.
Persuasive
Writing
Ballet
Nightie
By
Pixel
I
think I need a ballet nightie.
I
want flower buttons.
The
flowers are the same as my earrings.
The
colour is pink.
The
end.
Description
My Pyjamas
By Jessiah
Let
me tell you about my pyjamas.
They
are onesies.
They
are stripy.
They
are warm .
They
are cool.
My
Super Pyjamas
By
the Kowhai group
(Ranya)
Let
me tell you . I think I need super pyjamas.
This
is why.
If
you made me some PJs with snow coming out of them like Elsa we could play and
make our own super snowman.
Some
pjs with wheels.
I
could zoom to the supermarket.
Description
Timothy
the Rat
By
Benji
Let
me tell you about Timothy.
He
is strong and Timothy looks like a superhero and he is a rat.
Persuasive
writing
Super Pyjamas
By
Thisum
I
need some super pyjamas. This is why. If you made me some PJs with wheels I
zoom to the supermarket.
Persuasive
Writing
By
Eden
I
think I need super pyjamas
Because
so I can snuggle in them.
On
the back of my cat woman pyjamas there’s a black cape.
Persuasion
Underman
Pyjamas
By
Ethan
I
think I need Underman pyjamas because I’m like underman.
On
the back there’s a cape. The words are yellow and the rest is red. He has a
super mask.
The
end.
Persuasive
Writing
Spiderman
Pyjamas
By
Baxter
I
think I need amazing spiderman pyjamas with web slammings and gloves and boots.
On the back it picks up the messages and a spider on the front and I can web a
way
“fssssh”.
I
can go and get the bad guys. The suit is as red as blood.
Do
you like my story?
Description
Timothy
the Super Rat
By
Maika
Do
you know about Timothy?
Well
I do. So he is strong like a 1000 pounds and he runs like Flash. He is cool and
manly.
Also
I hope you like my story.
Persuasive
Writing
Kung
Fu Panda Onesie
By
Sam
Please
Mum, buy me a Kung Fu Panda onesie.
I promise I will be good and help around the
home.
I
will be the best boy ever!!!
Persuasive
Writing
By
Alyssa
I
think I should have flower buttons because they are pretty.
Next
I think I should have lovely hats.
Next
I should have
Persuasive
Writing
Super Pyjamas
By Bailey
I
think I need super pyjamas. This is why. If you made me super pjs with super
jet packs because then I could zoom around the room with buttons and make them
metal so they won’t rip.
And
I can zoom outside too.
And
I can save people when they are clinging off a cliff. I can save a ___________ when it falling off a cliff with my jet pack.
Description
Timothy
By Erina
Let
me tell you about Timothy.
He
is a boy.
He
has a monkey.
He
is helping.
I
hope you like my story about Timothy.
Description
Timothy
By Phuong Nhi
Do
you know about Timothy?
He
is stronger and very very stronger. He can help.
Description
Timothy
By
Keita
Let
me tell you about Timothy.
He
is trying to get fit and he saves a fat
elephant too. And he jumps and he got and I thought he broke his jaw and I hope
you like my story about Timothy.
Description
Timothy
By Lane
Do
you know about Timothy. He is a boy. Timothy is strong as the Hulk and as fast
as the Flash. He likes to help and save people.
He
can hold a thousand things like Hulk and
he can hold a million pounds like Hulk is the same.
I
hope you like the story about the boy called Timothy.
Description
Timothy
By
Isaac
Let
me tell you about Timothy.
He
is powerful.
He
has magic pyjamas.
Persuasive
writing
Super Pyjamas
By Kobe
I
think I need super pyjamas, a jet pack to fly because Ironman needs to fly so
then I can get the baddies .
The
iron man is actually me.
Description
Timothy
By
Falcon
Let
me tell you about Timothy.
He
is strong as a house. He is a boy.
He
is strong.
WEEK one Term 2
This week we have been reading about ANZAC ted. Ask someone from Room 2 to tell you about it.
There has been some sensational writing in room 2 this week.
It is going on the wall this week. Hope you can have a look sometime.
Next week museum trip and launching into our heroes topic.
